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Review of Touch of Magic  
Review by Nikki Phoenix Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Really intrigued! An excellent start that makes me want to read more.
I would develop the main character, Rena, more. Deeper emotions and more personal insights would really make her pop on the page. I love the visualization the words give though. Maybe dive into a bit of background as well?
Really enjoyed this!


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