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Nightblue

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#4855446

Review of My Dearest Darling

Review by Nightblue

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

This is a very cute poem! :D
Now, I’m not sure if you’ve been informed about this in the other three reviews you’ve received, but there are a few grammar mistakes here and there. You’re welcome to ignore this of course, if you do not feel like changing it.

I am not sure if you meant “think” rather than “thick” in your first line,
“With out” is written together as “without”,
“Their” should, to be grammatically correct, be “There”,
And “rimes” was probably meant to be “times”
I believe you did not mean “hat we have been together” but “that we have been together”,

But otherwise you’re doing great! I always advise giving your work a single read over before publishing. :)
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Review of The Longest Day

Review by Nightblue

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

A truly wonderful poem! It tickles the brain in just the right way if you understand what I mean. It‘s neatly organized, the rhyming scheme the same except for the last two verses, which gives them more weight as you talk about a void that no one is familiar with that way.

It reminds me of how silence seems to make the seconds longer and the minutes stretch. That‘s „The quiet“ you talk about for me. Andwhile I may never know what exactly was on your mind as you wrote this, I can say that what I as audience see is magnificent!

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#4822484

Review of Cosmic Healing

Review by Nightblue

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

This is amazing! And yes, one does get the picture. Your vocabulary is wonderful and your words describe a scene that blooms in my mind with just a few lines. It’s great that you didn’t tell what the picture is about right at the beginning - it gave my silly and fantastical mind the opportunity to paint a picture on its own it could then compare with the solution you’ve given.
Once again, truly wondeful, glad to find a fellow poet!