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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Excellent story. I love the way you use the prompt words for flashes of detail, e.g. The grass/white shirt lead-in. The inner/outer monologue style works and the mention of the dad waving at the end is succinctly done - again, just enough detail. Good use of your 300 words and an impressive little view into someone else's world.
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