Hi! This is really good! This must be the story about the black dragon you told me about yesterday. Slynokio is a cool name. :) You're really good at the descriptions...I especially like how you described him flying. I wonder who's screams he was hearing in his head? Was it the lady's? Or were they the screams of one of his dragon ancestors?
Keep writing! I want to know what happens with Slynokio and the yellow dragon, and the boy. :D
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