Reading this gave me chills. I kid you not. I read it twice, and it gave me chills. Twice. What you have written here is a powerful piece of work, I'll not deny that. For those who will understand it, anyway. You have yourself a new fan, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Regards,
Naveen Chater
P.S: Try to use punctuation. They add a distinctive force and flow to poetry. Commas, semicolons, question marks are all punctuation you could've added to really add some polish to power.