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Review of Fire  
Review by Coda Napeland Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
A great tale of revenge. I like how it was "fire" ants that got him in the end; very appropriate!

Near the end, the description of the little girl watching seemed a little off somehow. Maybe a little too much explaining. The ending leaves a little to be desired, particularly the last sentence.

Overall, though, I really liked it. 4 stars. :] Write on!
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Review by Coda Napeland Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)
This story was really amazing! Great buildup, great ending. I was wondering the whole time just what James was capable of, and now I know. What a sad ending to a life. No edits that I could see. Write on!
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