Its a bit hard to follow the concept, but it is very interesting! please let me know if you decide to put more. I would love to read more Im really interested in learning what wasnt meant for her. She is dead yes? and why is he trying to save her soul?
The errors interupted the flow of my reading, but from what i read it grabbed me enough to continue reading if there were more.
some suggestions, maybe perhaps change morals to code, as morals is more personal and a group usual dont share morals but they can share a set of rules like a code.
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