This poem is interesting. I really like the overall meaning but I feel like you could have elaborated on a lot more of your lines. I think your poem would benefit from more use of imagery. Also I do not really like the how you made the font a bright pink color. It is a little hard to read, but overall i really enjoyed it.
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