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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this poem. There are some effective uses of imagery that engages the reader, well done. Though your poem reads very much like an enumeration of objects whereby it follows a sort of object, description/action format. Changing around the lines a little or cutting out words that aren't entirely necesary to the presentation or description
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