M.M. Chief's (midnighttramp) Reviews

M.M. Chief

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#4145731

Review of Juliet

Review by M.M. Chief

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)

I liked the story, And I liked the ideas around the first chapter of your story. My concerns are less about the content, as much as the presentation. I got lost in some of your descriptions, and some of the others could have used more imput. What does The Hall look like? What does the president look like? How many people are there? What does Anima look like?

I did like how you Juliet used old world phrases in an unfamiliar way. Remembering definitions and such. I want to know what happens with the story, And I have a similar desire to know more details about the world and characters. In the process of a story of this magnitude you can create it as diverse as you please. You should really tap into that. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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#4145220

Review of My Mother's Poems

for entry "Nighttime"

Review by M.M. Chief

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I love this. I read a lot of depressing things. And this is the first time I've read anything about the night time that brought a positive reflection of the night sky. The idea of angels whizzing overhead, just out of sight, makes my evening a little bit brighter. Thank you for posting your mother's poetry.

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#4144183

Review of yet again

Review by M.M. Chief

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

This should be longer, but if it was it might dote the short, bittersweet reality. We sit, we wait, we remain ourselves, regardless of what the world does or expects. But I really feel like the root is "I will always be here, When I am needed, For you, Yet again." I feel like that last part speaks more than the rest of the piece. Great read!