The emotion of this story is viceral. It really got my heart pounding. The end was so abrupt I felt like rereading it to ease into the characters acceptance. The only typo I see is in the 4th paragraph, last sentence " He told her if she ran he would find her, press kidnapping charges, and gain full custody of ???? during the divorce. " Should it be us?
All in all it was an exciting read!
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