Very nice and i think the form is fine. Its how most writers feel when the are trying to get all those thoughts ut and put down. I thought this was perfectpoem thank you for sharing.
your poem is not depressing its the simple truth though dark and can make ones heart heavy thus the truth. Very nice and to the point. I enjoied it very much.
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