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Review by Apache tear Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi! So I just read your story, and I have to say I liked it.

So, the best thing was the way you made the introduction also the conclusion. It was shocking in a good way, because I didn't see it coming.

Is there going to be more of the story? Because a lot of things weren't explained. For example, what was Lloyd doing at the begining when he got to the town? Who is Pickipsi? And what happened at the end with Max and his family?

Anyway, well done, and keep writing.
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