NOOOOOOO i love the cliff hangers you have to keep those it keeps me more interested i cant wait for the next one i was surpised to see when i finished the first three i saw that you just had written this one like 5 seconds ago love them
Its vary sweet yet so sad i liked it. I wish i could write a nice poem like this one yes i am a newbie and i can only write story but its still funnn!!!!
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