This is very cool! I think the shape of it made me smile. I personally love the rain during spring. And I find it is very much like magic. The poem is so simple. For random enough reasons, i like the lines:
And it sounds like
a warm spring night
and
the short, pure line of:
laughter and freedom.
Good work! I love it! Keep On Writing!
-Mae
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