Beautifully written. I love the expresive imagery; the poem is visually stimulating as I watch this bird take fligh and see through her eyes what awaits.t. You have a knack for writing superb poetry. It is a pleasure to know yiou and have the opportunity to read and comment on your work. It is nice to see you posting here. Are you ready to publish yet?
I like your campfire, and the imagery you have woven into your flames to intice the reader to ask for more. Well done. Thanks for the opportunity to read your marvelous work.
Mac
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