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Review by PallasAthena Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (2.5)
Overall, I think your story is pretty good. The story doesn't describe much, but the dialogue pretty much explains the whole thing. Vivianca the angel is in love with a human boy but Shariel, her brother doesn't approve right? Sort of like from My Little Mermaid. I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope she can rescue Ryan before it's too late.


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