Not bad. I like the sortable feeling in it. This would make an interesting story in my opinion and to me it seems the right length so it can work in many genres. I enjoyed but I only gave a 4 because no I really want to see this in a longer version/story. I would give GPs but I don't have a lot. :( But you earned some when I can afford to give out.
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