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Review of AMERICAN TEEN  
Review by locoindi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Hi Anisa - I enjoyed the raw emotion in your poem. The first three lines are very powerful and drew me in. The anger is palpable . The ending -specifically the last two lines seem a little disconnected from the whole theme of the poem and could do with a bit more work.
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