I was deeply amused by the ending of this. I am embarrassed to say that I cracked up laughing, and when you're the only one in a quiet room with very good acoustics and there's a sudden sound, it's loud and almost frightening. Never the less though, I regret nothing. It was funny, with absolutely lovely imagery. I could almost see everything you described as though it were coming through my computer. Very very good. Well done. :)
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