Woah...
That was really dark, but way cool. You have a great way with words, I really want to read more stuff like that! Its that sort of writing that makes people really think, and I love that. Way more interesting than the stuff we have to read at school. I love a challenge, and trying to fugure out the meaning behind your poem was a challenge but I think that's how poetry should be.
I've written some stuff, check it out if you want. Any comments are welcome : )
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