I like this a lot. I found myself in tears by time I was finished reading it, I have felt the torment as your character does. Hopelessness. Wanting to have pain just so I would have something to think about. Scratching my nails against things in hope that they would break is something that I did a lot, I was amused, so to speak, as I watched the blood pour out and drip from my fingertips. Great story, can't wait to see more.
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