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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)
Wow..that was hot....
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Review of Just a Fairytale  
Review by friend indeed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)
I dig it...L.
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Review of Blessings  
Review by friend indeed Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)
Beautiful....nothing to add...sent to my self...to stay inspired..thanks for your truth and inspiration...L.
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)
Of course I dug it my mother's family sharecropped....You commented that the poem's topic had frightening simularities to today..Do you mean in terms of how we work so hard to try to get ahead but never seem to gain an inch??? I know thats something I can certainly identify with..L.
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
In verse 2 the 2nd line....I think- "now all of my love I bestow" flows smoother...I don"t think U need the words "upon you" at all.In verse 5 the 4th line you wrote dose...should it be does? In the 6th verse 2nd line-I don"t think you want her to grow "surly" in your arms;surely grow? :) Of course, this is certainly beautiful; all the words the female form would desire to hear. It very clearly, with gentle and controlled power conveys devotion,passion and desire. Verses 2-7 gave me mild heart palpitations~so we know I am certainly female.Although I"d like to think if a male were my muse my inspiration for such writing he would be equally flattered. Breathtaking and outstanding.
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