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This is sad and sweet and I like it!
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smoke weed eat yogurt
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Good job, girl you crazy!
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ahhahahahhahahhhaahhh! nice !
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Swag walter... swag
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Awesome job gingerella
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very nice, but be happy
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Nice job! good imagery throughout the poem.
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very very very nice! ps im still sorry for hurting you :p
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mauaahhahahahaha! nicely done I am officially depressed.
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Very nice imagery in the poem, i think it was very well written.
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I am about to leave for college so this poem means a lot to me.
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It's amazing how much detail you can get from just the short poem. The lines are a bit confusing at places all together but each line was great.
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this poem was amazing! I loved it, just the connection to it and the imagery overwhelmed me in a good way, nice job!
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hahahhahahhaha! funny story keep up the good work!
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I think it is a very well interpretation of how your life changes and you lose your light in the process.
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Nice poem! I love the imagery you get when you read it. It really makes you feel like you know the girl and you feel bad for the situation she is in. Then the end tied it together very nicely. Slightly choppy but it works well.
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Nice Ending! I loved the end!
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