KimE's (kesme) Reviews

KimE

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#4772808

Review of Rearranged

Review by KimE

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

I enjoyed reading this. I love the times you've used. It's funny along with good imagery. Thanks for sharing!

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#4772798

Review of The Answer Is Prayer

Review by KimE

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I love this entry. Just being a teacher alone is tough. After reading this and knowing what you did for those kids-its wonderful! I grew up in a church too, never attended VBS but still it sounds fun. I love how you added quotes and bible verses. Just something, when you add quotes, make sure to put the quotation marks from begining to end. Great Write!

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#4715049

Review of LGBTQ+

Review by KimE

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

I like this. It's straight to the point. It's true. The last line made me chuckle. Good Write!

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#4714647

Review of Oh, pants!

Review by KimE

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Hello again,

I'm not a professional writer or anything like that level yet. But I like to give my input if that's okay.

I do like reading your flash fiction. This story made me laugh a bit. I got a full sense of where the character was and its purpose. The ending kind of threw me off. I get its a bit of a twist with the name and pants. Question, the bold font at the end, who is asking that question? And why everyone was calling him Jimmy?

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4714646

Review of My Blinking Brother

Review by KimE

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Hello,

I enjoyed this flash fiction. It was simple and showed just a small glimpse of a moment. And yet had a lot of meaning. I loved it. Great Write!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4714391

Review of Forest Of The Stones

Review by KimE

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Hello, I thought this poem was very loving. It touched all my senses and it had a nice flow to it. No breaks. I really enjoyed it. Great Write!