I enjoyed this poem a lot! You're a newb? Well, newbs can go a long way on Writing.com! I did! I suggest you not space so much, though. It is kind of hard to read a poem that is so long in big spaces like that. but, overall, I think you are capable of great things! And I hope to see more works from you!
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