Tthis is just amazing. I really like it. This'll be hrd to reveiw. Okay, let's get the good stuff out of the way. The metaphor is really deep, and artfully done. The set up is kind of like a horror story though, so it was a little misleading. However, the metaphor was really deep, and i liked that. I liked That you can writte well. And i like that you can take a look at our world and frame it this way. However, i nottice a few fluency problems (I'm using it as a reference tto how perfectly you could write in the english laguage) especially with how choppy it could get at times. Kepp writing!
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