jessiii's (jessicawatts12) Reviews

jessiii

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#4848234

Review of Ebber Snootnoseful - Writer's cramp 9-18

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)

I enjoyed reading this.It's silly, sharp, and knows exactly what it's doing. Ebber is fun to laugh at but Mr.Manny Servant steals the show by turning every mistake into a brilliant success. The humor is playful and over the top, making it a light, entertaining read that doesn't overstay it's welcome. I have some ideas for the story which i would love to share with you on any other platform you prefer.

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Review of Family Tree (First Chapter)

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

I love this! It starts off so cozy and nostalgic. I could almost smell the old attic and see the dust dancing in the sunlight.

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#4843359

Review of Friendship

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

This poem beautifully captures the spiritual depth of friendship not just a bond between people. The tone feels warm, sincere, and rooted in faith. After reading this poetry i got some ideas for the visual representation of the poetry.

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Review of The Clock Was Wrong. -word count: 972

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Really solid and noir vibes. Kimberly goes from damsel to mastermind fast, and the clock twist is clever. The fake confession and the sunrise reveal hit hard. Great mix of tension and misdirection.

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Review of Wrong Place, Wrong Time

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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

loved the dynamic between Dafydd and Louis. Awkward co workers facing monster dogs is weirdly charming.