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I believe in constructive criticism and honesty. I can adapt my review style to fit the kind of feedback an author is looking for (e.g., developmental suggestions, fine-tuning, proofreading, etc.), but will always try to be as encouraging and helpful as possible.
I'm good at...
Plotting, characterization, dialogue, structure/pacing, and professional considerations. I can also do serviceable technical editing/proofreading, but I'm much better with developmental/creative feedback.
Favorite Genres
I read almost everything. I particularly love genre fiction (mystery/thriller and science fiction/fantasy especially) and nonfiction of all kinds.
Public Reviews
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Review of With You In Mind  
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Hello Wildflower B. I. C. Author Icon,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really enjoyed the structure and the pace of this poem. I thought it was engaging, evocative, and clear. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Hello Shirley Author Icon,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives


You did a great job with the detail and description in this piece. It was easy to read, engaging, and well paced. Nice work!



Suggestions


No specific suggestions for improvement.



Overall



Overall I thought you did a good job with this item. Well done!


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Review of Shuttered In  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello 💙 Carly: Happy New Year Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the February 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !


Positives

You did a great job detailing the emotions and the actions that are involved in caring for someone with dementia or another degenerative cognitive disorder. The repetition, the apprehension, the vigilance required; everything was depicted effectively and with care. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this story. Well done!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thanks again for taking the time to enter this round of the contest!

Sincerely,

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Review of 119  
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
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Hello Lonewolf Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the February 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !


Positives

I really enjoyed the worldbuilding and the detail in this story. I thought the structure of the piece worked really well and the pacing was tight. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a great read. Well done!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thanks again for taking the time to enter this round of the contest!

Sincerely,

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Review of Under Celine  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
Hello SeanFhear Author IconMail Icon,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. It was short, concise, and had good imagery. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Review of Dear Me, 2026  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
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Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I thought your goals were clear and well articulated. I think this letter will serve you well throughout the year as you refer back to it. Nice work!


Suggestions

For me, the bitem links felt like a distraction in the item. The list of regular contests could have been accomplished with regular item links that would have allowed you to preserve the connection to the activities you're referencing without overshadowing your own writing.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Sincerely,

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Review of Dear Me 2026  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
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Hello WriterRick Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the February 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !


Positives

I thought you did a good job with the motivational aspect of your letter. Your writing was clear, concise, and impactful, and the letter was short and to the point, which will likely come in handy as you refer to it later in the year.


Suggestions

In the second paragraph, I think you need to articulate how many sessions you're writing a day. You mention 700 words per session means you'll have close to 100,000 words by March 31, but if you're only writing for one session a day, that's closer to 42,000 words. Are you planning on writing multiple sessions per day? You might want to explain in greater detail so the math works out for the reader.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading your Dear Me letter this year. Nice work!


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thanks again for taking the time to enter this round of the contest!

Sincerely,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
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Hello TeeGateM Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I like the specificity of your letter. You clearly articulate a number of goals and add quantifiable forms of measurement to them, which is the cornerstone of setting yourself up for success. Nice work!


Suggestions

The one resolution that felt a little too prescriptive to me was reading a portfolio item from a friend every day to "support those friends." That's a pretty tall order, and one you might have difficulty achieving from a logistical standpoint, unless you're talking about particularly prolific friends and/or a high number of them.


Overall

Overall, I thought your letter was well written and articulate. Nice work!


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Sincerely,

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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
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Hello John Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

You did a great job with this Dear Me letter. The specificity is outstanding, and you write in a very conversational tone that is simultaneously friendly and tough on the recipient (you) about getting your act together. This was a very compelling read and one that I could see motivating you all year long. Great job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this entry. Well done!


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Review of Dear Me 2026  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
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Hello Mousethyme - missing luck Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I appreciated the straightforwardness and simplicity of your letter. You clearly articulated the things you wanted to work on, and didn't belabor the point too much. It was a concise, quick letter to read.


Suggestions

I would have loved to have seen a little more elaboration in some areas. Taken as a whole, the letter felt a bit prosaic, as if you're just listing things off matter-of-factly, and it would be great to have gotten a sense of what these goals mean to you from an emotional perspective.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read and thought you did a good job with the letter. Nice work!


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Sincerely,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Review of Dear me 2026  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)
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Hello Spirit words 🦋📜 Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I liked the short, staccato format of your letter. It was punchy and stood out from the other entries (most of which used a more traditional form of letter). Nice job!


Suggestions

At the bottom of your letter, you have what appear to be some unrelated artifacts including notes, a font test, etc. I would recommend removing those to make the read a little cleaner.


Overall

Overall, I thought your goals were well established and clear. Well done.


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Sincerely,

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Review of Dear Me,  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Emberly Gray Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I liked the fact that you focused on one primary goal for your letter. A lot of other entries explore a wide variety of goals and try to list everything, and I appreciated the singular focus of your effort. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overal, I thought you did a good job with your entry this year. Well done!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Elisa the Bunny Stik Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I thought your letter was well-articulated, and well-written. Your goals are clearly laid out, and I enjoyed the additional details and context you added in to keep the reader's interest. I particuarly liked the anecdote that you opened the letter with.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with your letter this year. Nice work!


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Sincerely,

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Review of A Letter for 2026  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello amfp Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I like the assertive, direct tone of this letter. A lot of people will list goals or refer to things they want to accomplish, but this letter feels like there's some emotion and motivation to it. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this letter. Well done!


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Sincerely,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Review of A Letter To Me  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)
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Hello Silvern Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of the"Dear Me: Official WDC Contest" !


Positives

I thought your letter was short and too the point, without belaboring the prompt too much.


Suggestions

While I never expect entrants to fill up the entire word count if they don't wish to do so, I would say that there's probably an opportunity to expand your thoughts and articulate your goals a little better here. Using less than 10% of the available word count for the activity leaves the piece feeling a little underwhelming and underdeveloped.


Overall

Overall, I think you have a strong foundation to this piece and it could be really compelling with further development and expansion.


I hope you've found this review helpful, and thanks again for taking the time to enter this round of the contest!

Sincerely,

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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with the imagery and the structure in this piece. While short, the poem was visually appealing and easy to follow along with. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a solid piece of poetry. Well done!


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Review of Unfurling  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I thought it was well structured and the imagery was excellent. In a few short stanzas, you did a great job of clearly articulating a vision and bringing your reader along for the ride. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed this poem. Well done!


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Review of Who am I?  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Positives

I really like the structure of this piece. Breaking up your thoughts and perspectives into different categories like what you're thinking, seeing, hearing, etc. was a really effective way to organize your thoughts and present them to the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this poem. Nice work!


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Review of The Dark  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (3.0)
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Hi Sesik Author Icon,

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Positives

I think you're off to a good start with this piece. The detail and description in these few short paragraphs was impactful and intriguing, and the writing was eloquent. I could easily see myself wanting to read a little more about this character and his experiences.


Suggestions

I know you mentioned in the opening paragraphs that you're looking for feedback, but it's difficult in a piece this short (after the intro/disclaimer, it's less than 300 words in total) to give anything other than quick, surface-level thoughts on the limited details in the piece. Pacing is difficult to assess in only a few sentences, but nothing stood out as particularly in need of revision.

One small suggestion is that you might want to consider formatting the "author's note" with more separation from the text of the piece, so that the break between those two elements is more clear. Writing.com has a variety of tools that would help with this, from font sizes, to dropnotes and popnotes to help condense information and separate it from the text of your piece.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed your introduction here and think it has a lot of potential. I wish you the best of luck if you decide to continue it!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Positives

I enjoyed the specificity of the imagery in this poem. I thought the details were well-articulated and vivid, which really stood out.

The line "seeking refuge from the deluge" was a personal favorite of mine.


Suggestions

I'm not sure I understand the title reference within the context of the poem.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was a well-structured, entertaining read. Nice work!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Lonewolf Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !

Positives
I thought you did a good job with using dialogue to move the story along. It helped develop the characters and kept the pacing tight. Nice work!


Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall
Overall, I thought you did a good job coming up with a compelling take on the prompt. You included all the elements in a convincing and natural way. Good job!


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Review of Morning's Glow  
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello 💙 Carly: Happy New Year Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !

Positives
The characterization and setting details in this story were great. The cabin by the lake is a vivid setting, and Arlynn's experience was well-articulated. It felt like an excerpt to a much larger story with a lot of potential. Nice work!


Suggestions
TYPO: When she could stand up, she wiped the tears from her eyes as she glanced...

The man's name isn't mentioned until very late in the story. For several mentions, he's "the man" or "he" or "the police officer" at first, then - toward the end of the story - it suddenly pivots to "The dog stayed until Ryan looked back and gave a whistle." I think the name "Ryan" needs to be introduced earlier in order for this casual reference to work.

For me, the last sentence (That had been a dramatic experience.) could have been better. It sort of blatantly tells the reader how to think about the encounter that occurred previously in the story, and I think it would be stronger if you led the reader to draw their own conclusions about how dramatic it was based on context clues as they read. I think the piece would be a little stronger with an ending line that either hinted at what was ahead, or even just left the reader with something to ponder.


Overall
Overall, I enjoyed the read. Well done!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Sumojo Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !

Positives
I enjoyed the body horror element of this story. I thought you did a great job balancing the excitement of the initial results Barry was enjoying with the dangers of being too excessive about it. The story was a compelling, well-paced read.


Suggestions
"Barry's job as manager of the local supermarket... each aisle was a hundred yards long..." - This line caught me a little off-guard because I don't know any local supermarket with aisles that are the length of professional football fields.


Overall
Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Nice work!


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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Humming Bird Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !

Positives
I thought you did a good job with this story. The setting was well developed and the characters were engaging. In only a thousand words, you managed to tell a compelling narrative. Nice work!


Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall
Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. Good job!


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Review of The Adoption  
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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (4.0)
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Hello Brandiwyn🎶 Author Icon,

Thank you for entering the January 2026 round of "The Bradbury Contest" !

Positives
I thought you did a good job with this story. The themes of loss and love came through clearly, and the characters were engaging. The search for a puppy and the juxtaposition of adding to the family while also dealing with a loss of family was a great narrative choice.


Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall
Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Well done!


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