Nice, I love chocolate chip cookies too. Who doesnt? This poetry is cute for kids and adults. If I were a chocolate chip cookie , I would want those that were hungery to count my chips first then eat the.whole thing swallowed by a big glass of milk. Be sure to devour every bite so I can be as strong as the one that eats me. I havent thought about that.
I am.not sure what this poem.is talking about unless it is talking about a storm when the surroundings of mountains can be seem.and then they cant when it is pouring rain. I am not sure why the last line is there though. Its a pretty piece of work though. I may have this all wrong. Could it mean you lost your love one that summer day. I lost my love my.hubby at that time forty.two years six years ago. That first year wasnt the best but its getting better.every year. But never really forgotten.
I like this. God is so good. I definitely know that. I love any.verses of the Bible that is good. I try to be good. It is hard to be good all the time but I try. Seem like everything I go through. I can look back and say God helped me through that. Last year was no picnic. And neither was January to me but just.yesterday. I git a big blessing. I will never forget and I owe it all to God. My hearing has.suddenly got bad it git so bad thatnwhen I went to church I could.nit hear preacher now that was frustrating. Anyway. I went to doctor for my regular pills I need but ask her about someone to clean my ears before. I go any future like hearin aid. Anyway. They.cleaned them right then. And all they needed it. I can hesr things I havent heard.before or not in aong time. Im.blessed.because of God love. Cant wait till Sunday. God is so good. This is.a lovely read
Wow. Im not sure I can review this right. Yes things are evil now.There is a God that knows what is going on. He is in control. Trust Him. I really cannot agree or disagree cause Im not you. I do believe good instead of evil. Ok. This.was.about a.song. well i cannot.say.there either.cause right now im.listen to.a gospel station where you hear good music and hymns. My life is around my church right now. I dont have hubby any more.but have children and grandchildren I do believe America is great but can be better
Wow. I hope you are not so bad now. I personally try not to dwell on bad thoughts or evil things. I have God in my heart although Im not saying Im good all the time cause its hard to be good. Thats why there is a God to help with your problems. Ive never done any of them things. When I was a kid and things got tough I walked or rode my bike a little ways until I got tired or there was no way to go but back to house. Things s eem easier. When I got married if we got in arguments and never really fights I would write down thoughts in my journal which I threw away now Dont write alot now but as you say plan to get back into it soon. I written poems in past and I like to go back and see if I can improve on them. I find mistakes and inspirations I didnt think about when I first wrote them. Oopp I wrote too much. Oh well thats life
Interesting. But everyone.should know nobody.can equal God there is only one God. And he is awesome.Yea.scientist believe one thing but the creator God knows what is going on cause he has created the world in the first place
Wow never thought of a stick.compared to you or me.I can see it. A stick with loads of.wood is like you or me with its material wrap around you or me.We are.from a.little baby to a mom or dad or grandparents with kids. I like it.
Wow. Good poetry. My.sister could.make creative dolls that.could tell a.story perhaps.Interesting that you used little red ridinghood.as the theme of the poetry. I could.see.how.many facet ofthestory one could create. Depending on how the doll.is made. Like maybe tje doll.has a book.that.she is reading and it is perhaps tiny.
Like it. Simple but unique. I love the title. I hope this next year will.be better for all.A. a lot can happen in a day with God help. A new beginning perhaps sunny day prayer and praise with God at.night prayer or praise before bed
What a delightful poem. Tellsa story too. Kind a like Santa represents too good outweights the bad. Toys for girls and boys. Has many stories to tell.Beautiful tale of simple person. With glasses. I can relate. Ive had glasses since the third grade. That is a long time ago. What an ending where. There were angels with glasses. Why. Who knows. Santa may perhaps had glasses to see too. You know Angels may have glasses too see there miracles been made with God help. Love. The poem
Very good to me. Haiku are.hard.for me.at times. Love cheese. Yes.I can relate cheese to life. There are varied.cheeses just as.there.are.different.phases of life.
I like this story. I love my mom. Too and wish she was with us on earth this Christmas. It sounds like a.sailor maybe going. Home.maybe for Holiday perhaps. If it isnt I missed the point Im.hoping my mom is. Watching me from.above this Christmas.
Wow. What a tale. Im.not really like the subject though but maybe you had no choice ,poetry was good to me .what a strange title to the poem. Like I said.dont like horror either but. I kept wanting to see what happen at end.
Im.not.sure.but to me your.poetry is talking about life.right now..like the virus.and its.many people that died. I can relate in that I wish this.virus would.come to an end. I wonder why but its not for me to say. Thus whole year has been none like no other. At.first my mom.died.and.buried in January and then March.virus that.no one.knew.would leave us all wondering.what next. God knows.but not telling us. At.this.point I.dont want to know only that.this.next year.will be better.but. im.not.sure of.anthing anymore. Just.that with God help I.can make it tnrough. God is good and He loves us all
Awesome. Love.the story. While my.grandkids.dont bekieve in Santa anymore. Im going.still believe.and put up stocking. Anyway. Cause I love. Tje thoughtnof.Christmas and love it brings to kids.this time of year. And yes it.may bring a little fantasy to someone life. Say. This year. It isnt the same right now.my.mom died just last year 28 of December and six years ago 14 of December my hubby passed. I wish i could.skip them days. Can I do that. I dont think so..but life goes on. Beautiful story
Wow. Now that is a poetry or sonnet. He really. Thinks about the questions of wolf and rabbits. If everyone thinks about his reactions.before he eben thinks.of.doing somethin bad. There would be less.riots protests. Etc. Hadnt thought.about animals with that.capacity for love thought and God and prayer.
Awesome. I like it. You.can.imagine the water.rippling.through the brook as you.write in.your journal..inspiration is.definely.there. love the completion of. Beautiful words of nature like fine.trout, pretty fountains, and.sounds from.the.brook.
This writing was pretty good except for the evil cusing. Im.not one to do or read it. In fact I stop and didnt want to go on. Sorry the giant was a.good intruder though. Interesting wjat I read though
I do not know of anybody that is autistic. I liked your poetry.I heard of people like your Brandon though. I do not know.why people want to be so mean. Either I am.glad.your Brandon is still there.with you. I know it may be hard sometimes. God is good that is probably the reason he is with you to make you smile and give some joy.
Sounds ok to me of course talking or reading about Jesus is ok with me . Yes you should love one another. Love your neighbor also why because its in bible. And Jesus did too. You are suppose to be bold and tell about church Jesus and God or Lord. Even if they decide you couldnt write about him. I would. I love him.too.
This poem is good and amusing. I am a senior too my hubby died before his traveling days to look forward too at first he had a stroke then after I was getting use to him.being home and going to church and all twelve years later had heart attack. Just getting use to being at home now. You are right the world is quiet different. Inlike slow. I told my grandchildren that this grandma likes. To be slow on purpose. Great poem
Sounds good to me a lot of.detail. Never have a named vehicle . Do you still have ruthie. Sound like you had quiet a rainstorm. Love the detail. You remember all that wow. Guess it was memerable. How.many years or are.you still married. I was married for fourty two years that was five.years ago before God. Took him but Im.fine with that now?
Awesome. The poetry was sounded likena story instead of poem. Why do we fall now.that I dont know. I have fallen a few times.myself amd had.surgery not from.fall but bleeding. Turnrd.kut I had two large ulcers cut out that I didnt know I had. Thank God they.got them.out. I do feel like my life was in God hands or.tecnically in surgeon hand.
I do bet the surgeons and nurses. Have a lot to think.about.
Sound good to me. Wondering about when we get to heaven will we want to dance even when we.dont do it on earth . It is deep but Im hoping you are imagining a place where its alright to dance whether you are young or old poor or rich beautiful or ugly. This is where it confusing. Yes some people even friends do not always agree . With time life could be one dance
Sounds delightful to me. I can see Santa chatting with that little green guy in a bunch of.clover. Children would love to read or listen to this bit of.story. Cute trying to compare him to an elf. In my imagination I definitely can see it and throwing in some magic What a story you could.develep one day. Tbe Irish would love it too. I guess you did.this.for St Patty Day. I hope you have a nice day like your leprechaun and Santa
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