I think it was great. It was so simple and straight-forward. It got the message across splendidly. I especially liked the notes. Including your inspiration for the poem was a definite plus. A lot of people see unfortunate people simply think nothing of it. Its probably because it has become so common. Its great that you reflect on what you do and set out to do better.
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