I love it. It is certainly a good description of the raccoon. The rhythm is good and easy to follow. I think Raccoons are very funny looking as they look like robbers.
This would make a good poetry book for children. Hope you win. I am trying to write a poem too.
Did you enter her in my contest? A beautiful little poem. You can tell by reading it that she is well loved. A truly precious little elderly lady. My dog Ladybug is 12 years old. I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope she feels better soon. Good luck in the contest.
You hit it right on the head. I was away from my writing when I became ill and didn't have any desire to write anymore. I joined WDC and look at me now. Your little poem says a lot to writers like me and it was great with the flow. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing and making my day.
Can't wait till second round. I love word puzzles. I entered one that needed as many words as possible for the word Beatles and I won. So, I'M ready. I have always loved things to do with words, I like Scrabble and WORD WHOMP on Pogo.com. So, I will put on my special thinking cap and get ready for the ride. See you soon.
I love it, you hit it right on the head. Very easy flow and rhyme was terrific. I too, have lived north and south. I found your poem to be accurate on your details and it held my attention very well. I like the costumicons also; it gives vision to the poem.
How very wonderful written. I imagine I would not move either. The flow was fantastic and easy to follow. I was hooked from the beginning till the end. It was very funny but entertaining also. The rhythm was easy to read. I think it is simply awesome and hope to read more of your port soon. Thanks for sharing.
Very well written and the rhyme and flow are great. You tell the story of the brook so well. No spelling mistakes or grammar errors. It was fun to read. I wish you luck in the contest. I will try to visit your port soon and see what other wonders you have hidden in there.
I love WDC. it has given me the energy to get up every day and write. The only thing is I am a trinket junkie and have quite a few but unable to find more.
Scared to love again you say to yourself...
"How can you fix a broken heart?"
Such a beautiful written poem. Full of feelings and emotions, I have been where the last verse talks about. The flow was easy to follow and kept my attention very well.
OH, my gracious, how very beautiful. I love cats and this one you describe seems to do what a cat does; entertain. the rhythm was great, I was enthralled all the way to the bottom. I enjoy your contests. Your poem has given me some ideas for writing some of my own.
This was a good write. The flow was very easy to follow, and I was captivated from the beginning till the end. Imagery was good, I could see it all in my mind. I will visit your port soon and see what else is hidden there. I wish you luck in the contest.
How very beautiful. You did a wonderful job with the subject. These things do confuse me sometimes as I do not know the forms of poetry. But I try and will contend to enter when I can. Your poem touches my heart. Keep up the good work, you are good at it.
Very well written. Looks like you got the hang of it rather good. I did my first one which was only 1 verse long. Maybe I'll try to expand it some more. Anyway, very good one. When I write I don't know the forms very well. I just tell myself a story and write. I hope you win. I liked it a lot.
This poem has so much meaning. You did a good job describing her. I could see her standing there. Your description was exactly as an art piece would appear. It was written with thought and feelings. It is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it so very much.
Very good Amy jo. I also entered one for WINTER WONDERLAND, I thought it would be hard, but not really. Your poem has great flow and was very easy to read. I enjoyed it very much. Silver Bells is my favorite carol. Good luck in the contest. I will try to come visit your port soon.
I found this very easy to read. It seems you have found a new 12 days to celebrate. I enjoyed reading it and it was written very well. I am going to make up my own 12 days and hope it turns out as well as this one did. Once more good job. I will try to visit your port and see what else I may find
Thank you, so beautiful. I lost my mom a few years ago and it has been hard being without her. Your poem eases the pain some. I have written several poems about her. Please come visit my port. ONCE AGAIN IT WAS VERY MOVING. THANK YOU. I will try to visit your port as soon as possible.
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