This is interesting. I feel like this type of piece was mad to be spoken out loud to whoever it is you're addressing. I was slightly confused about who it was addressed to but that might just be me. I really enjoy the questions in this poem because it grabs my attention. Keep writing!
Cheers,
Liv.
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