I thought this was really good and very well written. its actually expresses emotion and feeling. i think this is very good. its sad but also very meaningful. goob job:) i really did like what you wrote. i think you did very good and should conitue to write more.
i don't really understand the idea behind the poem. although i don't personally like it, i do like the grammar and words behind the poem and i also like how it is somewhat telling some kind of story. i would say a job well done. good job, but i would like to see something a bit more interesting.
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