Its an interesting read. But i felt like i started a story in between. In the beginning three names just thrown, i got confused. who? who? who? it would be better with introductions. im not saying that you should give everything out in the beggining itself but the reader should have something to build up on.
yay!! they're gonna meet!
Awesome story! i was hooked to it beginning to end. the mystery in the beginning. slowly you begin rooting for the guy. But why did it have to end? i thought we should be given a reason. Out of the blue she calls again. Nevertheless, its a wonderful story. The characters are not defined. We have no idea what kind of people they are. Only thing i could figure out was Ru cared about his work and that was the first time he did not.
Its so sweet! They spend nights talking. They talk 5 hours continuously. then again she calls back! The beginning grabs attention, The end leaves one craving for more.
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