all in all a very good piece. i'm not sure if you intended this to be an image that replicates humans but it seams that you have done a very good job of showing how close the chickens are to humans. the stupidity of the animal when put how you have written mirrors society. we all seam to be unconcerned in life with others problems. we are all floating in an ignorant bliss. we stay in this place until one day the same fate meets us. i think you have done a brilliant job showing this. most exalt i enjoyed reading this piece. it really makes you think thank you.
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