Christina,
I can't offer tips for improving. I can only say that I really like this poem. It has both an emotional impact and a questioning that all of us have. I'm new to this blogging world and haven't read any other of your poems but you capture something in this one. When I finish this I'm going to my blog and share a poem about the same subject. I hope you will read it too.
Funnyriter
Printed from https://webx1.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/funnyriter
Generated in 0.06 seconds at 6:15pm on Mar 14, 2026 via server WEBX1.