Would love to give higher, but you lost me in the middle. Might have been the minor grammatical errors up front, or that fact my mind was running through all the creation stories out there. Nonetheless, I liked your premise. And your piece widened the scope of perception of the universe as we may think we know it. To the point where I lost track of creation stories and tried to count the various systems such an even expanding universe might truly hold. Mind blowing!
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