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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)
On the whole, I liked where you were going with this piece. You maintained a consistent energy that convinced me it was the same person narrating throughout..

The opening statement of 'who I am' contradicts the following descriptions of who she is but is not wrong in the context of it being teenage a narrator. Good work. Keep it up.
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