this must have taken forever to come up with and finish .. i liked it tho .. really iim just trying to get enough points for a 4k rewar for reading my work.. and its not often i find something i like.. but this ... long :) piece i like :) also please rate my stuff .. i give this 4.5 :)
thanx 4 the advise..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i'v just started reading this.... i am on chapter two..... i cant follow the storyline very well.... but im getting there .. i think im just a bit thick .. lol jks... anyway .. my faveorite character by far is hugo valdez.. he really showed that reporter :LL pleasereview my work too :) thanks
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