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Review by fire Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (1.0)
How could this get 4 stars? The language is terrible, the sentences are all "He ran. He jumped", there is no sense at all. Quite hard for reader to follow the plot.
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Review by fire Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (1.0)
Too short.
Literacy of this is almost zero.
Read the books and try find the differences between your text and text in books.
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