Ok this is hysterical but *shudder* couldn't the ending be nicer?
*shudder*
Ok, the review-This is a simply wonderful story. The intro got my attention so I clicked on it and loved it.
I loved the dialogue between all four characters.
It's a good read and the only change I recommend is there is an erroneous carriage return in Satrana's dialogue.
Wonderfully well written. I felt like I was fortunate to sit perched on your shoulder throughout your painful learning process.
Thank you for the caution of the real vice the imagined. I am sure that this possibility is not stressed enough to those in search of true love on line.
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