fgh's (fghfh) Reviews

fgh

Review Requests: ON

21 Public Reviews Given

21 Total Reviews Given

1

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4570616

Review of FNAF new story

Review by fgh

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.5)

Hy ! Great idea here! Beofre reading your story I was a complete stranger to Five Nights at Freddy's! But now the only thing I want to do is to play the 5 games on Steam :D
Realy thank you for giving us the opportunity to know this wonderfull horror game ;)

I have 2 story too, maybe you could ad some horror chapters in it? :)

2

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4514399

Review of Body Swapping Machine

Review by fgh

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Good interactive story here :)

The interactive is pretty addictive!The number of chapter allows to read during hours, I like it!

The only thing I have to say is about the characters names. I think they are way too similar, during the story I asked myself multiple times "Wait who is who??!! Is it Ember, Amber, Ellee??!.."

I know you can't change that now but i think t'es à good remark.

Anyway, keep writing, it's very good 😊

3

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4514394

Review of Rainbow Drops

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Very great choice of interactive story :)

The idea of wishing drops is good, because everything is possible in the story depending on the preferences of every reader and writer!

Everyone can add his own story in the main story and create a world where everyting is possible 👌

Keep adding stories like this one! It's very great!

4

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4514270

Review of New Body Switching Machine

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Their is a lot of body swap interactives involving a technological machine, but I have to say I love your interpretation!

I think that tour interactive chapters are more exiting ans diversified than the other interactive on this webside :)

I am just a bit sad that the arc with Michelle Anderson swapping with te girlfriend is not longer,it's my favorite :)

Anyway, keep writing 👍👌

5

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4513650

Review of The Witch Sister

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Only 5 stars because I can't give more 😊

I realy like your interactive story idea ;)
Granting the sister with magical powers to tortures her brother is great 😊

About the chapters, I think that you could make them a bit longer. This way it the immersion in the story would be better :)

But, very great work :)

6

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4513648

Review of FNAF new story

Review by fgh

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (3.0)

The idea of the interactive story is pretty good. It allows to the player of this game to take place, in a way, to the game by letting his imagination wandering.

But in my opinion, I think that the different chapters should be longer and more suspens should be added 😊

Anyway, great job 😊

7

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4513647

Review of Dust To Dust

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Hey! It's just to say thank you for this interactive story :)

The idea with the dust that anyone can have to take over someone is just great :)

The multiple choices you added are granting us unlimited stories ideas!

It would be very cool if you could continue the story on a regular basis 😊👌

8

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4513503

Review of New Mommy: Welcome to new family Redux

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Hey, it's just a little message to thank you about your story!

I must say I love the idea ! It's realy changing me from all of the other interactives i am reading :)

It's the only one intercative based on this kind of story on writing.com and i am glad you wrote it 👌

Have a nice day :)

9

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4495933

Review of The Mischievous Theif

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

You guy are a top writer! This story is very great! I think you should do more of them and even longer ones 😊

Maybe you could make an interactive story with this idea??!!

I am sure it will have a lot of readers on this website! And with all of the great writer i see every days, it could become awesome 😊

10

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4494763

Review of Your Headswapped Wife

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

A very great story, good idea but I think it deserve To have way more chapters in it! It's not a Miranda L story but with a writer as good as her a story like this one could be very very good with more chapters, it would be cool going further in the exiting plot lines 😊

Keep doing Miranda you'r great!

11

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#4463935

Review of I Know That Ghost!

Review by fgh

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I think this is the best story on writing.com! And in my opinion, i think it would be even better if it continue on the girlfriend and/or Cherie part of the story :)

So keep doing dood work :)