Zen's (fantasy588) Reviews

Zen

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#3421311

Review of Measure Twice, Cut Once

Review by Zen

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

I really enjoyed this! Usually I read fantasy type books but I gave this a try because I was curious to find out how he got the injuries for his daughter. I like how you used different types of words to describe something. I and probably many other writers have a problem trying to do that but it seemed easy for you. At first the beginning seemed odd but after reading more I realized it was a good choice to start it out like that. The only thing I have to say is that I think any form of telling what the person looks like in the begining might bring in something. I don't really thinks it needs it much but I thought I might mention it.

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#3398112

Review of An Excerpt: The Eternal and The Girl

Review by Zen

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I would like to start this review by saying that your writing is amazing. You gave enough information to tell what was around and didn't over do it at all. When you were writing about her fight everything seemed so fast paced yet the writing didn't seemed listed like some tend to do. I am thogh sorry to say I have nothing bad to say about this. I read it twice to try and find something to help you with but your writing is so far better than mine I could't find anything. Congrats that was great.