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Review by ErinJessica47 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (3.5)
I hate the fact that someone had to die in the story. I love the fact she is trying to find out who was her dad. The only things I would change is not having a person die in the beginning of the story. Overall i thought it was pretty good.
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Review of The Journey  
Review by ErinJessica47 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)
It was very discirtive and that what i like about it. You know what you reading in your story. You can tell alot about what is going on in this story. To make it better iI would have people saying things like screaming ah and talking like having a conversation before they get on the boat.
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