Perfectly lovely. The elements of everyday life; sensations , thoughts, forgetting, are artfully mixed with unreal feelings created in the reader's mind. I felt connected, like I knew exactly what you were feeling and thinking. I felt the panic when he came to find his muse gone, and the eagerness as they sat together. I felt the passion and love when they did, and yet again, terror as she spoke her name.
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