i liked the poem very much very honest feelings/ the only words or items in the poem i would leave out were to change th bmw for a volkswagen thet didn t soud me as well as any other exemple you could have put ther to make clear want you wanted to . but i liked it very much ,very passionate and true to yourself,elisawetta
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