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Review by durva Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (2.0)
The plot summary indicates that an interesting fiction is in store - with giant leaps taking us into the Future and close encounters with A.I. However, it cites no specific science principle/theory/assumption which has been expanded or extended to weave the story. So the reader is neither expected to know or understand science to be able to grasp the happenings nor flex his thoughts in anticipation and has to completely rely upon the imagination of the writer. Merely replacing giant/unknown creatures with A.I. and wars with interstellar conflicts can, at best, be described as Fiction - not Science Fiction.
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Review by durva Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (1.5)
With due sympathies to the pain experienced by a broken heart, the reasons stated for the heart-break are self-centric and shallow. If the poet so longs for the company of the love of his life and fondly remembers the conversations they had, then I fail to see how the stated reason for all his miseries should change any of those shared experiences. The universality and depth of a feeling as beautiful as love seems to have been undermined.

Also some grammatical and spelling errors have slipped in (It should be 'threw' in place of 'through' in the last line of the poem)
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