If there is on thing I could say about this short but sweet poem it's this. This is the Gospel in poem form. Love the way you started the poem but emphasizing that "it should had been us..." Very powerful and moving as you kept going. The story of redemption in the form of a poem. I LOVE IT!
-Duality
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