I like it. I like it a lot. Your poem reminds me so much of a friend of mine who I used to exchange poems with. I find the title to be a bit of a mis-match for the content and I wish that the poem would be longer (though it is fine as it is now also), but all in all this is an enjoyable piece!
Thank you for sharing. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
Rook
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